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Naruto: Ninja Generation V. 3.0.1 :: Ninja Files :: :: Creation :: Character Creation :: Approved Characters
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dimitrix sirozaki
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GENERAL INFO
Name:dimitrix sirozaki
Age: 12
Height: 5,5
Weight:102
Ninja ID: Ex: 1234-567A-BC8D-9EFG N/A
Village: N/A
Rank:academy student
Element:lighting,fire
Ninja Type:nin expert
Occupation: academy student
BIO dimitrix was born in a small town in (village not yes specified) he was handsome and very popular among girls wich he's doesn't care about he likes sparing in wich he defeated half of the second year class his mother is a baker in a bakery she sends him cookies and bread to the academy city he seeks to become a military leader and protect what he hold dear
Description: roxassora.jpg[/img]
Personality: quiet and searching for a battle anytime
OTHER INFO
Family: mother aina sirozaki
Sensei: N/A
Students: N/A
Team: N/A
Weaknesses: earth
Strengths: thunder storms and a great pair of sword
Jutsu:
Bloodline:sirozaki
RP Sample:he quickly rose through the trees untill he found him singing o the forest and said "beutifull is int?"said the man with 50 bountys in his head I just kept quiet and threw myself at him he threw his flute at me wich I cuted with my swords out of nowherehe appeared infront of me and hitted me with his knee in my stomach he jump back holding my stomach and spited bloodi ran towards him twist as fast the man ran towards as well he threw me sixt punches towards the face and vital points In my body and parried them all and made a cut in his chesthe smiled and suddenly earth spikes were heading directly at me I ran up the tree for safety and sended a three kunai towards the man with ninja wire and exploding notes entangling him i said"don't move If you wanna be spared"the man smiled at me again and sudenly was behind me I noticed and blocked his attack with my sword cutting his kunai and making a cut in his face suddenly he punched the floor and the ground started shaking I knew If I dint hurry the guy will kill me I infused my blade with my lighting chackra and pierced the mans chest he looked at me and smiled again and he dissapeared and I fell on my knees from the lost of blood from the early cut
GENERAL INFO
Name:dimitrix sirozaki
Age: 12
Height: 5,5
Weight:102
Ninja ID: Ex: 1234-567A-BC8D-9EFG N/A
Village: N/A
Rank:academy student
Element:lighting,fire
Ninja Type:nin expert
Occupation: academy student
BIO dimitrix was born in a small town in (village not yes specified) he was handsome and very popular among girls wich he's doesn't care about he likes sparing in wich he defeated half of the second year class his mother is a baker in a bakery she sends him cookies and bread to the academy city he seeks to become a military leader and protect what he hold dear
Description: roxassora.jpg[/img]
Personality: quiet and searching for a battle anytime
OTHER INFO
Family: mother aina sirozaki
Sensei: N/A
Students: N/A
Team: N/A
Weaknesses: earth
Strengths: thunder storms and a great pair of sword
Jutsu:
- Bunshin No Jutsu - Replication Technique
- Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique
- Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique
Bloodline:sirozaki
RP Sample:he quickly rose through the trees untill he found him singing o the forest and said "beutifull is int?"said the man with 50 bountys in his head I just kept quiet and threw myself at him he threw his flute at me wich I cuted with my swords out of nowherehe appeared infront of me and hitted me with his knee in my stomach he jump back holding my stomach and spited bloodi ran towards him twist as fast the man ran towards as well he threw me sixt punches towards the face and vital points In my body and parried them all and made a cut in his chesthe smiled and suddenly earth spikes were heading directly at me I ran up the tree for safety and sended a three kunai towards the man with ninja wire and exploding notes entangling him i said"don't move If you wanna be spared"the man smiled at me again and sudenly was behind me I noticed and blocked his attack with my sword cutting his kunai and making a cut in his face suddenly he punched the floor and the ground started shaking I knew If I dint hurry the guy will kill me I infused my blade with my lighting chackra and pierced the mans chest he looked at me and smiled again and he dissapeared and I fell on my knees from the lost of blood from the early cut
Dimitrix Sirozaki- Support Moderator
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Join date : 2009-11-22
Re: dimitrix sirozaki
Hmm a few spelling and grammatical errors, along with a few paragraph and spacing issues. But otherwise fine. I'm going to assign you to the RP Academy for the length of one week to help out with the spelling and grammar errors.
Edit: Since you did it on your iPod Touch you don't have to go to the RP School, Welcome to the Ninja Academy.
Edit: Since you did it on your iPod Touch you don't have to go to the RP School, Welcome to the Ninja Academy.
Emanyeru Ai Kouseitan'i- Administrator
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Join date : 2009-11-21
Age : 32
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