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  • Uchiha Izuno - 雷光一閃

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    Uchiha Izuno - 雷光一閃

    Post by Guest on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:07 am

    GENERAL INFO

    Name: Uchiha Izuno

    Age: 10

    Height: 5'9
    Weight: 105lb

    Ninja ID: 4273-479A-JK4D-9ZVT

    Village: Valley

    Rank: -

    Element Katon

    Occupation: -

    BIO
    Spoiler:
    Sendohiru was known to be the greatest Uchiha alive after the death of his father.A few days before his occupation of the Kage title,he had ventured through out the shinobi world hoping to gain more knowledge on the art of ninjutsu,traveling from his home of Sawagukare to the majestic lands laying in the borders of the Marsh Country.He had traveled from Country to Country,finally ending in the Sun Country,which was his destination at the time.The lone Uchiha had reached Tanigukare,a village surrounded by massive mountains that's peaks pierced the clouds in the sky above.Sendohiru had decided to stay in the village for a few days before heading back to his destination.


    While staying at a hotel in the populated Town of Kaiki,the Uchiha had met a beautiful young women,who had been working at the hotel as a waitress in the Hotels sake bar.He had fallen for the girl and had begun a love affair with her.Unfortunately for Sendohiru,he was suppose to return to his village to claim his title of Kage.The next day,after sleeping with the women,Sendohiru had left the village and traveled back to Sawagukare.He had successfully become the Kage of his village an ruled it with an iron fist.Sawagukare had become one of the most feared villages in the ninj world alongside Yamigukare,which was part of the Shadow Knight Empire and ruled by Emanyeru Kouseitan'i.


    About nine months later,the young women gave birth to a healthy baby boy.His hair was as black as the night sky and his eyes like the Honey found in the hive.He was a wonderful and greatly cared for by his mother Nitsume Hanake.The mother had named the child Izuno Hanake,taking his mothers last name due to the fact that she didn't know Sendohiru's.Although Sendohiru had left Nitsume,she still loved him and decided to take care of little Izuno even though he wasn't present to support her in raising the child.As years passed and Izuno aged,he was sent to Tanigukare to join the villages academy and take on the life of a shinobi.It was the start of his life.


    Izuno had become extremely interested in the arts of shinobi and had a passion for it.Every single day,after the academy classes,he would train his accuracy by doing some target practice sessions and his speed by sprinting around the village.Within a few years,right before the child turned six he had become the strongest Academy Student in the village,surpassing all of the other students strength wise, speed wise, and education wise.He was well educated in the art of Ninjutsu,being able to perform Goukakyuu no Jutsu at his age.He had also taken on the nick name of "Lightning Flash" for his abnormal speed.However,even though his attributes were geat,the boy would never fight anyone other than his sensei and wouldn't even hurt a fly.Some students took this to their advantage and started to pick on and tease poor little Izuno.They had also segregated him from the games they played in the village.


    Izuno had been shunned from his former group of friends and was left alone.To make things worse,he had found out that his mother had been diagnosed with a disease that killed within days.Every day he would have to face the fact that his mother was going to die and that he was worthless.Things weren't going quiet well for little Izuno.While resting in his room,a mailman had knocked on his house door.He was holding a letter for Nitsume,something about Sendohiru.It was information on the Kage of Sawagukare meant for Nitsume to read.The letter revealed the clan that Sendohiru was part of,the Uchiha.The ill Nitsume had read the letter and was suprised to see that her son was of an Uchiha.She had told Izuno all about the legendary clan to cheer him up.Good thing for Izuno,his mothers attempt didn't fail.He had cheered and even got his last name changed to Uchiha.The young Uchiha was proud and happiness took over.


    The following morning the Uchiha had awakened and headed out for Academy.He had spent more than fire hours learning without pouting or feeling depressed,until it happened.While in class,a man in glasses knocked on the class door,requesting for Izuno's presemce.He looked like a medic and Izuno knew that he wasn't hear to tell good news.The Uchiha walked out to speak to the man and found out that his mother had died due to the disease.Izuno had felt a terrible pain in his heart that he couldn't bare.Hatred emerged in the young boy's heart.....he was never going to be the same again.

    After a few months,the child made it through the Academy and became a Genin.He was placed in a three man squad and endeavour hard training.He and his team consisting of a young boy named Rendo Hinjin.Rendo didn't really like Izuno much,but the third member of his squad did,her name was Yutsuki Tama.The three and their sensei went through a number of missions that were dangerous.One day,in the Grain Country,Izuno and his squad had to retrieve some information from the Monks,when they were attacked by a group of Rogues.

    His team fought valiantly for hours,only to be defeated by the group.The sensei of the squad had been killed trying to defend his students from the savages that brought about chaos.Izuno was beaten and so was Yutsuki,but Rendo was unharmed for some strange reason.It turned out that Rendo provided the rogues with infromation on the mission and had promised them ryo if they were to kill his fellow teammates.Izuno was enraged and was forced to watch his friend Yutsuki be burned alive.He had cried at the sight and was left alive to live with the fact that his own teammate betrayed him and his squad.The Hatred within Izuno had grew more and more.Luckily,the monks had found him and returned him to Valley where he was safe.The child had become a one man team.

    Description: Izuno is a young shinobi born the 18th of April.His hair is a pure black color,but can change blue in the Summer.His eyes are almond shaped and are of a Hazel color,most likely being the cause of attracting girls.He wears a long sleeved black colored shirt with white colored shorts.One the back of his shirt is the symbol of the Uchiha clan.The Valley headband could be found tied around his forehead.

    Personality: Izuno Uchiha exhibits a very calm and serious personality and speaks with less formal diction.He has great faith in his own abilities and the abilities of his fellow villagers.He often tends to be silent and let others do the talking,almost being the follower type,never making his own decisions.However,he can be very manipulative and seeks to strengthen himself by using the ones he follows.


    OTHER INFO

    Family:

    Sendohiru Uchiha [Father] / Inatzu Uchiha [Brother] / Kouen Uchiha [Brother]
    Sensei: None

    Students: None

    Team: None

    Weaknesses: Izuno displays a shy nature and doesn't like fighting that much,even though he shows exceptional skills in spars.He also seems to be the silent type,being called a mute by some in his village.Izuno dislikes Taijutsu due to his lack of knowledge in the art of hand to hand combat.


    Strengths: Izuno can perform ninjutsu of his rank without problem and tends to learn ninjutsu quickly.He also contains immense strength for his age.The boy is said to be gifted by some in his village.He also seems to have great speed.Out running other Genin and having a unique body flicker.This is the reason why his nick name is "Lightning Flash"

    Jutsu:

    Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
    Rank: E
    Chakra/Stamina Drain: 2%
    Damage: 0%
    Range: -
    Type: Supplementary
    Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

    Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
    Rank: E
    Chakra/Stamina Drain: 2%
    Damage: 0%
    Range: -
    Type: Supplementary
    Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank: E
    Chakra/Stamina Drain: 2%
    Damage: 0%
    Range: -
    Type: Supplementary
    Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.


    Bloodline: Uchiha

    RP Sample: The sun emerges in the Horizon,shining it's great light across the small training field of Tanigukare.Resting near a tree is the little Izuno,regaining his stamina after a long training session.His right eye slowly opens,the left opening as well seconds later,as the strong light hits his face.He stretches and gives off a yawn,preparing for another training session."That was a relaxing rest."said the boy as he stood up from the grass.He would walk over to one of his set up targets nailed to a tree and examine the locations of where his kunai hit."Pretty good results,but not good enough." said the Uchiha as he observed the target.

    After examining his target board,Izuno would walk to the middile of the training field and stop once reaching dead center.His hand would quickly form a seal,causing smoke to burst beside him.As the small cloud drifted away with the winds,a copy of Izuno would be standing right beside the real one."Alright,it's time for me to test out my sharingan."He would nod his head,commanding the clone to make distance and attack.The clone would seperate from Izuno,now standing about twent feet from him and then dash in for an attack.Izuno would quickly perform handseals and inhale deeply,storing chakra in his abdomen.Izuno would exhale,releasing a large volume of flames that would form into a spherical shape and head towards the clone."AAGGH!!" screamed Izuno as he expeled the fireball.

    This did not stop the clone however.It would quickly change it's course and leap to the right,dodging the fireball."Impressive."said Izuno.The clone would appear right infront of Izuno,sending a palm thrust towards Izuno's chest.The Uchiha closed his eyes at the sign of the clone cocking his arm back."Sharingan!!!"screamed the boy,opening his eyes and revealing one of the three Doujutsu.He could see the slightest movement of his clone and would jab forward,destroying the clone."Works very well.With these eyes,I could see...."

    [Note: I do not have Sharingan,unless appointed by Sendohiru Uchiha]


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    Re: Uchiha Izuno - 雷光一閃

    Post by Guest on Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:13 pm

    Nice bio bro

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    Re: Uchiha Izuno - 雷光一閃

    Post by Guest on Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:19 pm

    Nice job little bro

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    Re: Uchiha Izuno - 雷光一閃

    Post by Guest on Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:47 pm

    This is gonna get approved

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    Re: Uchiha Izuno - 雷光一閃

    Post by Shikamori Nara on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:26 pm

    Length: Very good length on the bio and RP sample, the description and personality are fine however they can be expanded upon. 9/10

    Quality: The quality of the bio and RP sample are great, again the personality and description could be expanded upon, perhaps adding descriptive language would make it seem better. 9/10

    Description: The level of description is good but it could be vastly expanded upon. What are your surroundings like? Are there a large number of trees or very few? Is the grass well-trimmed and green or is it wild and yellowed? The farther you go into description the easier it will be for your opponent in a fight or a partner to visualize the setting you are trying to create. 7/10

    POV: You used third person throughout which is good. I personally don't like how you began in the present tense and switched to the future by using words like would in your sentences. It is acceptable but can be sometimes confusing because you are implying actions and the opponent might not know whether these actions have actually been performed based on their moves. 7/10

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