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  • The Advent of Thunder "Raigō"

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    The Advent of Thunder "Raigō"

    Name of Weapon or Item: The Advent of Thunder "Raigō"

    Location: Both wrists

    Description: the primary function is to enhance the effectiveness of lightning based attacks. The user can charge the blades with electricity and filter lightning jutsu through them with ease.
    as long as the ninja has wide enough knowledge about the jutsu their using they do not require to preforme the nesasary hand signs while combining them with the the blades.

    Damage 1-45% (Normal Hit)

    History: The "Raigo" was obtained by Kira during a mission in the village hidden in the valley before it was destroyed by Sorrow, on his way home he had stumbled over a container marked with the embel of Thor, Thor is the Norse god of thunde. while studieing the box he felt a calling within the deeps of his mind as if the item inside were hungry for blood.
    Kira bit his thumb and let the blood drop into the lock of the box, and as if a invisible force forced the box open, the inside was revealed and from that day Kira wore the "Raigo" instede of using his katana.

    Appearance: The Wrist Blade is clipped upon the arm, and cam spring forth from under a sleeve when needed to surprise any opponent he fights hand to hand. It’s very easy to conceal and will generally help the wielder get out of a situation or use the weapon to get closer to the enemy by making them think they are weaponless.

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    The Advent of Thunder "Raigō" :: Comments

    Kasai Odoriko

    Post on Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:05 am by Kasai Odoriko

    o.o Brush up more on your Mythology. I know this is an rp but it becomes different when your adding mythology into it, and when that mythology is changed and twisted it makes things seem unprofessional. For instance the Norse God of Thunder Thor had only one weapon the Mjolnir, which was a war hammer type weapon. So I think it unlikely that the box the weapon was found in would have The symbol of Thor on it. Also the Norse gods weren't keen to being bloodthirsty gods who wanted the blood of humans. They just wanted appraising from their followers and more men to join them in Valhalla. Also I'm not hating the whole, "strange object magically appears in front of you and just so happens to be for you by what seems to be fates will" thing but put that in there in the History. Don't be afraid to make it more detailed. Build up some time between then. Say how you started feeling this strange link to the weapon and how overtime you were drawn to it. I believe you can muster some more detail in there. Also touch up just a little on your grammar and spelling.

    I do like the lightning thing. You didn't overdue it, but at the same time you didn't make it all panzy like just cause you wanted it approved. I like your choice of weapon to match the element. It suits it well.

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