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    Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:56 am

    GENERAL INFO

    Name: Katsuki, Nagato

    Age: 18

    Height: 5'8.5
    Weight: 97lbs

    Ninja ID: 1111-222K-AT5U-1KIN

    Village: Swamp

    Rank: I do not know yet.

    Element Fuuton and Raiton || Wind and Lightning

    Occupation: None

    BIO
    Katsuki Nagato grew up in the village of Swamp, with his brother Futsuma Nagato; Katsuki and Futsuma were raised by their parents. Katsuki attended the Ninja Academy at the "Village of Swamp" with his brother.Katsuki and Futsuma returned home from the Academy, but their parents were not home, which made them a little worried; they had been waiting for 8 hours but finally they were home. Their parents founded two type of swords, and were about to bring them to the Kage, but instead they gave the two gigantic swords to Katsuki and Futsuma since they knew that those swords would help them in future Ninja Missions.

    Katsuki and Futsuma gained these type of bloodline that can make their wind techniques stronger then ever. The bloodline is called Fuurai. They gained this tyoe of bloodline from their swords. Once they had to go on a mission and somehow the forest were on fire, so Katsuki and Futsuma had to stopped the fire by blowing the fire away with their Wind techniques. Some citizen died in the forest but Katsuki and Futsuma saved most people by stopping the fire.

    After the Katsuki and his brother stopped the fire they came home but no one was there; they have found out that those citizen that died in the forest were their parents. Katsuki and his brother were so sad and furious that they both made a giant tornado out of their emotions and killed about 20 citizen around the area they were living.

    After so many years Katsuki and Futsuma turned 18 and decided to live on as a Shinobi....



    Description:
    Spoiler:
    he has a long gray/blue spiky hair; He is black gloves, a Gigantic Sword strapped to his back.

    Personality: Katsuki is a really fun guy, he plays around alot. But when sometimes he is annoyed or pissed off, he gets more serious and more cautious.

    OTHER INFO

    Family:
    -Futsuma Nagato
    Spoiler:

    Sensei: Don't have one yet.

    Students: n/a

    Team: n/a

    Weaknesses:
    -taunting me making me Angry which makes him more careless of his surroundings.
    -when sounds echo loudly into his ears makes him dizzy

    Strengths:
    -Ninjutsu
    -Big enourmous Chakra pool
    -Wind

    Jutsu:

    Dai Kamaitachi - Great Cutting Whirlwind
    Character Use: Katsuki, and Futsuma Nagato
    Rank: B
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
    Type: Attack, Defense
    Note: Also called Fuuton: Dai Kamaitachi

    Dai Kamaitachi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Sand ninja Temari. Named after a mythical creature, Temari uses her fan to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with her chakra. This technique is a bigger version of the normal Kamaitachi no Jutsu, having the ability to cause a great amount of cutting damage to the nearby area. But instead using a big fan to blow a concussive wind, Katsuki and his brother uses their swords.


    Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
    Character Use: Orochimaru
    Rank: C
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
    Type: Attack

    Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.



    Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains
    Character Use: Setsuna
    Rank: Unknown
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
    Type: Attack
    Special Note: Movie Four Only

    Fuuton Ninpou • Kami Oroshi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, Setsuna will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Wind chakra, which he will use to generate a whirling vortex of wind which he can send snaking towards his target.

    This technique can be used in conjunction with Hibashiri to create a powerful fire and Tsuchi Kairou to contain and focus the explosive blaze.



    Kazekiri - Wind Cutter
    Character Use: Katsuki Nagato
    Rank: Unknown
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
    Type: Attack

    Fuuton • Kazekiri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. A large slicing wind will then be created which can cut through his opponent. This can be used to immobilize large summons. This will be the initial attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU. It will be followed by Raiton • Shichuu Shibari to stun and trap the target and finally Doton • Otoshi Buta to imprison the summon in a gigantic sealed pot.



    Kaiten Shuriken - Rotating Shuriken
    Character Use: Futsuma Nagato
    Rank: -
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
    Type: Attack
    Special Note: Movie Four Only

    Fuuton • Kaiten Shuriken is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, Setsuna will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Wind chakra, which he will use to send his double bladed kama through the air as spinning disks. He can then launch these disks at his target like shuriken. Because he manipulates each individually, he can attack his target from multiple directions.



    Shichuu Shibari - Four Pillar Binding
    Character Use: Unamed
    Rank: Unknown
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
    Type: Attack, Supplementary


    Raiton • Shichuu Shibari is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. Four large earthen pillars will rise to surround the target summon. Lightning will then be unleashed to stun the target. This will be the second attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU. First will be Fuuton • Kazekiri to cut and immobilize the target. Then Shichuu Shibari is used. Finally Doton • Otoshi Buta to imprison the summon in a gigantic sealed pot.



    Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
    Character Use: Nagato (Pain)
    Rank: C
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
    Type: Attack, Supplementary

    Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, he will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.









    Bloodline:Fuurai
    Fuurai is not a kekkei genkai it is some what relatable to it; it turns the users eye purple, and around its pupil surrounded by a aurora type of color, but it is really light you can hardly see it. In addition to make the users Wind Jutsu stronger, and can control various type of wind.



    RP Sample:

    Katsuki now alone cause the ninja left him to train alone, he got kinda mad about it and slams his fist into the grass making a small crater.

    "I'll meet him again someday..."


    Katusuki with a serious face cause of a ninja leaving it made him want to train more and beat him in the next battle. Katsuki only way he thought he stood a chance was to train harder and get smarter as well. He has not fought many people on planet earth and he might not even be here much longer.


    Katsuki quickly gets back to his stuff to start his training again. He closes his eyes as he starts to go into a squatting position. His hands were folded in front of him as if he was praying. He listened to his surroundings and breathed in and out. He remembers the ninja speaking to Katsuki about the "After Image Technique." Katsuki remember the ninja saying he needed to focus his Chakra and also use incredible speed to.

    Katuski breathes in and out again as a gentle breeze passes by him. He slowly powers up forming a wind in his right hand. He Then fires a Wind blast into the sky and waits for it to travel on back to him. Katsuki waits watching the Ki blast moving in incredible speed towards him. Katsuki quickly shifts to the right leaving an After Image but it was very blurry and unrealistic. Katsuki failed but he will get better.


    A week later
    Katuski perfects the "After Image Technique" and fires 20 air blast into the air that travel back toward Katsuki. Katsuki's not worried is ready with a serious expression on his face. For a while now Katsuki has been seriously training after the ninja leaving him to train alone left him with a spark to get stronger and he plans on doing so. The ait blast come closer to Katsuki and with great speed Katsuki makes after image after, after image the air blast crashing right into them and making them poof but the After Images are prefect copies of Katsuki body and in every detail. Katsuki feels proud of his work.


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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Kaito Daichi on Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:19 am

    No history, no jutsus, your description must have words along with the picutre, though the picture is optional. There is no village by the name Amagkure, unless its meaning is one of our village, if it does please put the English version next to it. Your bloodline, is not acceptable considering that it states that you manipulate all elements and you can master any jutsu in a very short time.
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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:24 am

    oh ok i will fix it


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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Kaito Daichi on Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:28 am

    How about neither and come up with something more original?
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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:01 am

    ok fixed it a little just need to make the Jutsu then i am done Very Happy

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by NG Admin on Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:40 am

    Rinnegan is denied since we already have a rinnegan user
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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:17 am

    awww come one :S

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by NG Admin on Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:10 am

    Sorry kid, there's plenty of other good bloodlines to choose from.
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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Sat Sep 12, 2009 12:57 am

    this sux Razz

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Sat Sep 12, 2009 3:55 am

    yea but i have to change my bio and everything , i don't want to do it all over again :S

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by NG Admin on Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:01 am

    Its really not going to take you long.
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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:09 am

    Razz oh well...

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:23 pm

    I'm done, i think. Please tell me if i got any errors that i need to fix so i can fix it Very Happy

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:14 pm

    Wow, bet you i can make a longer Creation than this Katsuki

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:18 pm

    suuuuure Futsuma, whatever you say >__>

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Klow Zaithers on Fri Sep 18, 2009 1:37 am

    lmao!!! crisis core!!! wooooot
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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by Guest on Sat Sep 19, 2009 12:55 am

    Yup anyways could someone check this character for me? been waiting forever! :S

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    Re: Katsuki Nagato DONE

    Post by NG Admin on Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:55 pm

    Length: Length was pretty good. But i was hoping to see how you would do if it were a normal post. So for now good job but i was still hoping to see how you would normally. Do i hope your normal posts can keep up in length. 10/10

    Quality: Qualtity was pretty good too, just try not to make a new paragraph for each speech line. But good job with the description and connections. Try not to put your name in it so much though, use he instead of your name sometimes. 8/10

    Description: Good descriptions, good jutsu descriptions as well. 10/10

    POV: Third person, pretty good with that. But just like with quality keep from using your persons name often 8/10

    36/40

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