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    Shikamori Nara

    Post by Shikamori Nara on Fri Aug 14, 2009 5:07 am

    GENERAL INFO

    Name: Shikamori Nara

    Age: 10

    Height: 5'4"
    Weight: 100 lbs.

    Ninja ID: 5H4D-0W10-12D5-H1K4

    Village: Sawagakure

    Rank: Genin

    Element: Undiscovered

    Occupation: N/A

    BIO

    Shikamori Nara is the grandson of Shikamaru Nara and Temari. He was born in the Village Hidden in the Swamp after the restructuring of the shinobi world removed the clan's original hometown of Konohagakure. He is the younger brother by 3 years of Shoku Nara. His childhood was very much that of a spoiled younger brother. His parents made up for the clan's outcast nature in the village by giving Shikamori everything he ever wanted. When he was 4 years old his father bought him a shogi board and taught him how to play the game. Shikamori demonstrated the Nara's trademark genius strategical strength even at such an early age. It was clear that he had talent. His father trained him in ninja arts starting 2 years later, disguising them as clever games for Shikamori to play. Shikamori loved the games and learned very well. When he entered the academy a year later, he was surprised to find out the games he had been playing were really the techniques all ninja are required to learn.

    His academy years were mostly spent lazing around, either staring at the clouds or doing nothing. Since he had basically mastered everything already, he had a lot of free time on his hands. No one wanted to play with him, so the only thing he could do was face his father in Shogi matches over and over, which eventually got boring as his father was quickly outclassed by him. After that, he would basically laze around all day, unable to do anything else. Eventually however the boredom led to restlessness, he had to find something to do, so he resorted to bullying. If the other kids wouldn't accept him, He would just force them to let him play. While this worked, it led to almost everyone in the class hating him. He had one friend however, an Akimichi who had moved to Swamp by the Name of Chou. Him and Chou grew very close and eventually Shikamori stopped his bullying ways. They graduated together from the academy when Shikamori was 10.

    Description: Shikamori is taller than most kids his age and also weighs more, which gives him a sort of commanding presence over the other kids. He wears his jet-black hair up in a spiky pony-tail common among the clan members. His clothing consists of a brown shirt with a loose-fitting short-sleeved tan jacket over it, and a pair of jeans. He prefers casual dress to that of a regular ninja because he feels that regulations are too strict and he's too lazy to conform to every last one of them. He always has a look of tiredness or boredness on his face and he yawns constantly.

    Personality: Shikamori has a very laid back personality that masks a hidden intelligence. He hates work and often procrastinates or delegates his work to others with promises of payment, which he usually ends up working his way out of actually giving them. In battle however, his strategic flair shows through. He will plan out and set up traps and moves long before he actually needs them. When he loses he will mope about and re-play the battle in his head, wondering what miscalculations he had made about his opponent, or trying to discover flaws in his strategies.

    OTHER INFO

    Family: Shoku Nara (Brother), Unknown Mother, Unknown Father

    Sensei: N/A

    Students: N/A

    Team: N/A

    Weaknesses:
    --Absence of Shadows.
    --Prone to Genjutsu.

    Strengths:
    --Strategical analysis.
    --Better than Average Speed

    Jutsu:
    Kage Tate - Shadow Shield
    Rank: -
    Ekement: -
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bloodline
    Level: 1
    Description: The user makes a series of hand signs.When the foe launches an attack. The use places their hands on top of each other in their shadow. ( Note their shadow has to be in the direction of their foe) Then a wall made of black crystal emerges from their shadow. This wall is a crystallized form of shadow chakra giving it physical properties. It is used for only defensive purposes.
    Chakra Drain: 15% chakra
    Stamina Drain: -
    Health Drain: -
    Status Ailments: This jutsu subtracts 30% from Chakra-Based Attacks (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu), 20% from Physical Attacks (Kenjutsu, Taijutsu)

    Kagemane no Jutsu - Shadow Imitation Technique
    Rank: -
    Element: -
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bloodline, Supplementary
    Level: 1
    Description: Kage Mane no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. After forming the needed hand seals, the clan member is able to manipulate their shadow along any surface. By using other nearby shadows they can further extend the reach of their shadow, however they are limited to the surface area of the original cast shadow. Once the clan members shadow reaches the target shadow, it will attach itself. While attached the target will be frozen, only able to replicate in mirror form the actions of the clan member. If the clan member is low on chakra, the Kage Mane will falter and the shadow will return to its normal form.
    Chakra Drain: 5% (4% per post if attached)
    Stamina Drain: -
    Health Drain: -
    Status Ailments: Paralysis and forced mimicking of the user's movements.

    Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu - Shadow Neck Bind Technique
    Rank: -
    Element: -
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bloodline, Offensive
    Level: 1
    Description: Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. To perform the technique the clan member will first bind their target using the Kage Mane no Jutsu technique. Once the target can no longer move, they form the needed hand seal to initiate this technique. The clan member uses their shadow to form a hand which will creep up their opponents body to their neck. Once the hand reaches the neck, it will constrict in such a manner so as to strangle the opponent. However, the clan member will need to be careful. If their target has a lot of chakra, they can turn back the shadow hand and prevent it from binding their neck.
    Chakra Drain: (4% jumps to 10% per post)
    Stamina Drain: -
    Health Drain: (5% down to 2% per post)
    Status Ailments: Paralysis.

    Kage Nui - Shadow Sewing
    Rank: -
    Element: -
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bloodline, Offensive.
    Level: 1
    Description: Kage Nui is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. To perform the technique the user will first form the needed hand seal to extend his shadow. then they will then change the hand seal to cause the shadow to emerge from the ground in tendrils. The tendrils can extend and whip about and are strong enough to pierce nearby targets. The tendrils can also connect to the opponent's shadow and bind them.
    Chakra Drain: 7% (6% per post)
    Stamina Drain: -
    Damage: 10%~30%
    Status Ailments: Immobilization

    Kage Yose no Jutsu - Shadow Gathering Technique
    Rank: -
    Element: -
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bloodline, Supplementary
    Level: 1
    Description: Kage Yose no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. This technique uses the Kage Nui threads to extend from a Kage Kubi Shibari bound on the body. These threads can then pull an object back towards the one bound.
    Chakra Drain: 12%
    Stamina Drain: -
    Health Drain: 10%~60% (Based on objects attracted)
    Status Ailments: -

    Bloodline: Nara (Shadow Manipulation)

    RP Sample:
    (I'm too Lazy to think of something else right now)
    Spoiler:
    Shikamori lied down on his back, he was bored as always and figured he watch the sky. It appeared to be a pretty clear day with a slight wind from the south. The sun was bright but most of the light was shielded from view by one of the few clouds in the sky. Shikamori felt as if he was one of the clouds, imagining himself roaming free up in the sky without a care in the world. Unfortunately for him, that wasn't the case. He had work to do though he would rather not do it. He got himself up and yawned while he stretched out the aches in his limbs. As always the combination of the two made him lightheaded for a few seconds until he regained himself. He placed his hands in his pocket and climbed down the 2 flights of stairs in the building which was his home. His parents were out somewhere but he didn't really care. He passed through the main room and left the door out into the streets. The place had suddenly brightened up as the sun was unobstructed by the clouds now. He groaned at the heat and the sudden brightness in his eyes but adjusted and made his way towards the Kage's Office. He had been summoned for some important mission or something and he was already running late as it was. He passed by a small ramen shop when he saw his friend Chou eating away, paying no mind to the bill he was surely racking up. He sighed and called out to him. " Yo Chou, what are you doing? " His friend turned to him and smiled as he waved.
    " Nothing much, just eating my Pre-Lunch, After-Breakfast meal, want to join me? "

    Shikamori sighed, where the hell did he get all these meals from, it's like he just invents the things on the spot. Shikamori had business to attend to so he had to end the conversation rather quickly. " Yo, I have to go see the Kage so I can't stay and join you, but we can hang later alright? " With that said he walked off again. After several minutes of walking and stopping to talk to a few friends he made it to the Kage's Office. He entered and the Kage's personal assistant hurried him in, scolding him for being late again. Shikamaru shrugged it off, he was always late, so he was used to people yelling. When he entered the Kage's Office he was in a large wide open room, he could notice signs of neglected paperwork scattered all around and rolled his eyes. The Kage was even lazier then him, yet he gets yelled at. After a few seconds he announced his presence and the Kage turned to face him. The man was clearly powerful and had earned his position but wasn't cut out for the actual work itself. He looked over Shikamori for a while, his eyes seemed to pierce right into Shikamori's thoughts and feelings. Then he finally spoke.

    " Your late." Shikamori nodded and apologized before quickly asking what he was summoned for. The Kage turned to him and smiled. " Your not in trouble, and despite what you think it's not work, this is about your test at the academy. It's quite amazing actually, the scores you got were beyond belief. That is why it has been decided that you are too be promoted to genin immediately. Your skills are undeniable and we felt that keeping you there longer would be pointless. Congratulations Shikamori. " The Kage smiled and shook Shikamori's hand before presenting him with his village headband. " Wear it proudly. "


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    Re: Shikamori Nara

    Post by Shikamori Nara on Fri Sep 04, 2009 12:54 am

    Edited to the new parameters, sorta =/
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    Re: Shikamori Nara

    Post by Kaito Daichi on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:28 pm

    Length: Plently, though some of it was unnecessary. 9/10

    Quality: It was very good quality, not many grammar mistakes at all. 10/10

    Description: This always seems to be people's problem, you could've used more metaphors, similes, and personification; to make your rp sample more alive youc ould say. 6/10

    POV: Third person and very well done 10/10

    35/40

    85/100 A solid B. Rank- Genin. *stamps approved*
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