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Uchiha Kenzurai
GENERAL INFO
Name: Uchiha Kenzurai
Age: 12
Height: 153.2 cm
Weight: 43.5 kg
Ninja ID: 5667-729H-4TTF
[size=18]Village: Kawasagure
Rank: --
Element: Fire and Lightning [Futon and Raiton]
Ninja Type: Offensive Ninjutsu User
Occupation: --
Character Information
Biography
Personality:
Ken is a usually serious and silent guy who don't even talk to people around him but talks a lot to those people he don't like. He may seem quite quiet and serious to some but to the people that truly know him he shows more qualities of an introvert. Ken is a gloomy and introspective person, not easily given to socializing long with others. He generally appears uninterested and indifferent, leading many to believe he has a great ability to be a leader. But with all of this he always likes to stay polite, and is not often rude. However when duty calls, Kai has a strong moral compass and sense of commitment to his comrades. Even though, by his own testimony, he lacks bravery, he will sacrifice himself and face almost certain death for the sake of his friends or villagers without a second thought. In short, he is the very definition of how a leader should be like, and it is for his raw leadership skill. Besides this attitude, he has expressed a notably mature interest in marriage and raising a family; on the subject, he hopes to.
OTHER INFO
Family:
Inari Kaijou [Stepmother]
Futa Kaijou[Stepfather]
Sayuri Kaijou[Stepsister]
Real relatives [Unknown]
Jutsu:
Academy:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Other:
Name: Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: C
Description:: The user of this technique throws multiple large shuriken, for instance the Fūma Shuriken, in such a way that the first shuriken hides the subsequent ones by blocking the line of sight. To the target, it appears as if only one shuriken was thrown.
Name: Blurry Steps Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Blurry Steps Technique is a Ninjutsu technique used as an enchancer. The user pumps charka into their muscles to allow for a heightened bursts of speed, increasing the users speed by 20% for 2 posts. When the user moves the opponent wont be able to clearly see them as a blurry trail will form behind the opponent. This is useful so the opponent cannot get a fix on the target.
Name: Wire Manipulation technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Weaponry
Element: None
Description: This technique is used without handseals. With this technique, the user can manipulate wires like whips, to form deadly piercing strands, whips, binds, etc. in actuality, they use the puppetry technique, but embed the chakra strings through the wires. The user can control up to 20 wires at a time, but can perform at a master level of 10 or less.
Name: Manipulated Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Description:With this technique a translucent string, both elastic and highly durable, is attached to a shuriken, making it possible to alter its path after having thrown it. An expert will have the ability to freely glide the shuriken in any direction with just a single movement of their fingertip.
Name: Raiton: Lightning Flash Orb
Rank: D
Element: Raiton
Description: This is a simple lightning technique which is very useful. The user will gather lightning chakra in their hand into a small orb. They will then release it into the air above the opponent. When it explodes it creates a flash of intense light, making it near on impossible for the target to see. This can be used as a distraction or an escape tool. The flash lasts for a single post.
Name: Raiton: Electric Wave
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: The user prepares for this technique with a set of handseals before attempting to send a circular planer faintly-yellow electric wave from their midsection expanding in all directions. The wave of electricity expands is a sphere around the user, since it's painful to touch, anyone caught in the blast radius will be knocked back and stunned for a single post. The wave only extends in a radius 5m.
Name: Raiton: Lightning Finger Bullet
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton: Lightning Finger Bullet is a technique creates a lightning bullet which can be fired from the users finger. Once launched it can travel up to 50m, and if charged for a single post, can travel up to 100 m. The shot has great peircing potencial, and if it strikes the opponent, will most likely pass through them. The ability to pierce their body means that it will also paralyse the target for a single post.
Name: Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank:C
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object. While the technique is shown in the anime to be even larger and more devastating than Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique (and being able to melt rock), in the manga it is shown to be nothing more than a small burst of flame running along a line of wire.
Name: Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Name: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Name: Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air via their mouth and, gather up chakra in their chest, then spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. Sasuke is seen doing this technique without making a ring over his mouth. The fireball may ignite externally .
Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
Rank: C
Description:: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.
Bloodline/Clan:[size=18]
Name: Uchiha
Clan Symbol:
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
Sharingan Abilities: The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the chakra flow. The Sharingan can tell if a person is under a genjutsu because the person's chakra flow would be irregular.
The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra, though not to the same extent as the Byakugan. This also allows the user to pick up on subtle details, enabling them to read lip movements[3] or mimic something like pencil movements.[4] As the Sharingan evolves, gaining more tomoe seals, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react.
The Sharingan's third and most well-known ability is that it grants the user the ability to memorize any technique that he or she witnesses, apart from other Kekkei Genkai techniques. The user can memorize ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu with perfect accuracy, allowing the user to use the techniques as his own, or even modify them to create his own new techniques, much like Sasuke Uchiha's Lion Combo. In order to reproduce a copied jutsu, however, one must have the necessary skill or ability to perform them. A prime example is Rock Lee's brand of taijutsu. While Sasuke was able to copy some of Lee's moves, they put a much more significant strain on him since he hasn't trained nearly as much as Lee has. In addition to physical skill and kekkei genkai techniques, the Sharingan cannot reproduce jutsu dependent on other factors, such as summons that the user has not signed a contract with.
The Sharingan's final ability is capable of inducing a unique brand of hypnosis that involves suggesting actions and thoughts to the opponent through simple eye contact. When used against animals, the eyes of the target take on the pattern of the users sharingan while under its influence. When used in conjunction with the other aspects of the Sharingan, this allows the user to perfectly mimic every move their opponents make even before they do, making it appear as if the user can "see the future". More advanced Sharingan users can take the hypnosis ability even further by tricking or even trapping their opponent within an illusion. The potency of the Sharingan's illusion is dependent on the user's knowledge and skill with implementing genjutsu.
Although the Sharingan consumes the user's chakra while active, the chakra levels that the user must exert is so insignificant that they can keep it active constantly. In fact, Itachi Uchiha was so masterful of it, he was able to keep it active for most of the time, only once deactivating it after using Tsukuyomi on Sasuke and Amaterasu to escape Jiraiya. However, when a Sharingan is transplanted to a non-Uchiha, the chakra drain is significant, leading them to cover it up when not in use, to stop the drain.
[size=18]RP Sample:
Name: Uchiha Kenzurai
Age: 12
Height: 153.2 cm
Weight: 43.5 kg
Ninja ID: 5667-729H-4TTF
[size=18]Village: Kawasagure
Rank: --
Element: Fire and Lightning [Futon and Raiton]
Ninja Type: Offensive Ninjutsu User
Occupation: --
Character Information
Biography
- Spoiler:
The history of Ken is one of mixed emotions. His life was full of mostly joy, but also glimmers of indecision and pain. Ken was born 12 years ago in a small private room in the Konoha hospital. Ken would become the second child in the family as he would soon find out he had an older sister called Sayuri who was two years older than him. When Ken was born he was the apple of both his parents’ eye, especially his fathers as he had wanted a son for a long time. Ken was born into the Zaijou Clan, a royal and respected clan within Amegakure. He would grow up in a loving family, one which would give him everything he desired in life.
Kai's father was an ex-shinobi from the Rain Village, while his mother was a "stay-at-home mum". His father retired from being a shinobi for the village just after Kai's older sister was born. He was a jounin and felt that it would be safer for him not to carry on his duties and constantly be in danger, so he wouldn't miss a single moment of his childs life. This was a great relief for Ken's mother as he had wanted him to retire from being a shinobi for a while. Ken's father would soon work in the Amekagure Weapons Shop, one of the oldest and finest establishments in Ame.
So from a young age Ken and Sayuri were introduced to a world full of weapons. Naturally they would be interested in becoming shinobi one day just like their father was, and even though Ken's mother was weiry about this she knew that there was no chance in stopping it. Sayuri especially was very keen on being a shinobi. Her and Ken had a close relationship when they were young and were constantly playing and laughing with one another. Ken couldn't ask for a better older sister, she was always kind and considerate to him and would always be patient with him, in situations that she probably shouldn't have. She had a fascination with swords from a young age, and was a very talented ninja. Ken would often watch Sayuri and they father in the field as he taught her the basics of paper manipulation and weapons. Ken looked up to her, and because she had a passion for being a ninja, the passion started to grow inside of Ken as well.
Personality:
Ken is a usually serious and silent guy who don't even talk to people around him but talks a lot to those people he don't like. He may seem quite quiet and serious to some but to the people that truly know him he shows more qualities of an introvert. Ken is a gloomy and introspective person, not easily given to socializing long with others. He generally appears uninterested and indifferent, leading many to believe he has a great ability to be a leader. But with all of this he always likes to stay polite, and is not often rude. However when duty calls, Kai has a strong moral compass and sense of commitment to his comrades. Even though, by his own testimony, he lacks bravery, he will sacrifice himself and face almost certain death for the sake of his friends or villagers without a second thought. In short, he is the very definition of how a leader should be like, and it is for his raw leadership skill. Besides this attitude, he has expressed a notably mature interest in marriage and raising a family; on the subject, he hopes to.
OTHER INFO
Family:
Inari Kaijou [Stepmother]
Futa Kaijou[Stepfather]
Sayuri Kaijou[Stepsister]
Real relatives [Unknown]
Jutsu:
Academy:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Other:
Name: Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: C
Description:: The user of this technique throws multiple large shuriken, for instance the Fūma Shuriken, in such a way that the first shuriken hides the subsequent ones by blocking the line of sight. To the target, it appears as if only one shuriken was thrown.
Name: Blurry Steps Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Blurry Steps Technique is a Ninjutsu technique used as an enchancer. The user pumps charka into their muscles to allow for a heightened bursts of speed, increasing the users speed by 20% for 2 posts. When the user moves the opponent wont be able to clearly see them as a blurry trail will form behind the opponent. This is useful so the opponent cannot get a fix on the target.
Name: Wire Manipulation technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Weaponry
Element: None
Description: This technique is used without handseals. With this technique, the user can manipulate wires like whips, to form deadly piercing strands, whips, binds, etc. in actuality, they use the puppetry technique, but embed the chakra strings through the wires. The user can control up to 20 wires at a time, but can perform at a master level of 10 or less.
Name: Manipulated Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Description:With this technique a translucent string, both elastic and highly durable, is attached to a shuriken, making it possible to alter its path after having thrown it. An expert will have the ability to freely glide the shuriken in any direction with just a single movement of their fingertip.
Name: Raiton: Lightning Flash Orb
Rank: D
Element: Raiton
Description: This is a simple lightning technique which is very useful. The user will gather lightning chakra in their hand into a small orb. They will then release it into the air above the opponent. When it explodes it creates a flash of intense light, making it near on impossible for the target to see. This can be used as a distraction or an escape tool. The flash lasts for a single post.
Name: Raiton: Electric Wave
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: The user prepares for this technique with a set of handseals before attempting to send a circular planer faintly-yellow electric wave from their midsection expanding in all directions. The wave of electricity expands is a sphere around the user, since it's painful to touch, anyone caught in the blast radius will be knocked back and stunned for a single post. The wave only extends in a radius 5m.
Name: Raiton: Lightning Finger Bullet
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton: Lightning Finger Bullet is a technique creates a lightning bullet which can be fired from the users finger. Once launched it can travel up to 50m, and if charged for a single post, can travel up to 100 m. The shot has great peircing potencial, and if it strikes the opponent, will most likely pass through them. The ability to pierce their body means that it will also paralyse the target for a single post.
Name: Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank:C
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object. While the technique is shown in the anime to be even larger and more devastating than Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique (and being able to melt rock), in the manga it is shown to be nothing more than a small burst of flame running along a line of wire.
Name: Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Name: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Name: Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air via their mouth and, gather up chakra in their chest, then spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. Sasuke is seen doing this technique without making a ring over his mouth. The fireball may ignite externally .
Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
Rank: C
Description:: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.
Bloodline/Clan:[size=18]
Name: Uchiha
Clan Symbol:
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
Sharingan Abilities: The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the chakra flow. The Sharingan can tell if a person is under a genjutsu because the person's chakra flow would be irregular.
The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra, though not to the same extent as the Byakugan. This also allows the user to pick up on subtle details, enabling them to read lip movements[3] or mimic something like pencil movements.[4] As the Sharingan evolves, gaining more tomoe seals, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react.
The Sharingan's third and most well-known ability is that it grants the user the ability to memorize any technique that he or she witnesses, apart from other Kekkei Genkai techniques. The user can memorize ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu with perfect accuracy, allowing the user to use the techniques as his own, or even modify them to create his own new techniques, much like Sasuke Uchiha's Lion Combo. In order to reproduce a copied jutsu, however, one must have the necessary skill or ability to perform them. A prime example is Rock Lee's brand of taijutsu. While Sasuke was able to copy some of Lee's moves, they put a much more significant strain on him since he hasn't trained nearly as much as Lee has. In addition to physical skill and kekkei genkai techniques, the Sharingan cannot reproduce jutsu dependent on other factors, such as summons that the user has not signed a contract with.
The Sharingan's final ability is capable of inducing a unique brand of hypnosis that involves suggesting actions and thoughts to the opponent through simple eye contact. When used against animals, the eyes of the target take on the pattern of the users sharingan while under its influence. When used in conjunction with the other aspects of the Sharingan, this allows the user to perfectly mimic every move their opponents make even before they do, making it appear as if the user can "see the future". More advanced Sharingan users can take the hypnosis ability even further by tricking or even trapping their opponent within an illusion. The potency of the Sharingan's illusion is dependent on the user's knowledge and skill with implementing genjutsu.
Although the Sharingan consumes the user's chakra while active, the chakra levels that the user must exert is so insignificant that they can keep it active constantly. In fact, Itachi Uchiha was so masterful of it, he was able to keep it active for most of the time, only once deactivating it after using Tsukuyomi on Sasuke and Amaterasu to escape Jiraiya. However, when a Sharingan is transplanted to a non-Uchiha, the chakra drain is significant, leading them to cover it up when not in use, to stop the drain.
[size=18]RP Sample:
- Spoiler:
Standing on a hill overlooking the village, Zumi appeared calm and collected. It was odd, for so long he had been within the mist that blanket the village, and now he was over it. Looking down it looked like the village was under the sea, and the mist resembled the tides by the way it swayed in the wind. Zumi thought he was God standing where he was, high and mighty looking down at society. He watched as his fellow villagers walk the streets, appearing to be ants from where he was he laughed. He laughed of the thought that was one of them on a daily basis. He was no different from the average person, or was he? Zumi spent a long time finding his destiny, and he always thought of himself as different. Maybe he was, or maybe it was just him wanting to be different. But being different was something wasn't healthy in society in that time. With Konoha now in the Mist Village, everything had to run smoothly and less suspicious. If something were to happen, it could be a war in the whole village. Now that would be fun to Zumi, but the death of his comrades would strike him deep in the heart. Oh what a miserable day that would be.
Today was the day that Zumi would execute a missions, a assassination mission at that. He hasn't done a lot of those missions in his lifetime, so this one would be exciting. Although the thought of killing someone for his country didn't bother him, he hated the fact that he had to stealth. Dumb right? Liking assassination but hating stealth, talk about contradiction. The mission report said that the drug dealer's hideout is in a warehouse in the border of the village. A perfect place for secret, the abandoned warehouse was covered in a thick cloud of mist, and far away from society. Humako was his name, the person who has been causing the great Mist Village such bad reputation. Humako is heavily guarded, and the warehouse itself is like a mansion. It shouldn't be a problem for Zumi though, with his speed and ability he should be fine, hopefully.
Zumi jumped off the cliff, both his arms in the air and feet down in preparing to land. The wind felt amazing, rushing threw his body as he gracefully fell. Cutting threw the wind as he lands he heard the screams of the wind as they brushed off his body. Landing on a rock that stood off the cliff, he landed on his feet and quickly bent his knees to remove the force of the fall. Looking to his left he saw small rocks sticking out of the cliff. He figured he could hop on them and work his way to the village outskirts from the mountain area. One by one he hopped on the rocks, some broke while others stood still. His movements were swift and acrobatic. He occasionally walked on the surface of the mountain if a rock was too far away. After a while of rock hiking the image of a gigantic mansion became more visible. Buy this time Zumi was in the woods, and he stopped while on the surface of a cliff. Jumping down on a patch of leaves in the on the ground, he looked at his environment. The drug dealers hideout was locating in the woods, tall trees blocked the sunlight but the forest still had a glow to it. The mansion was located a few kilometers ahead of Zumi, it was there in the middle some trees. “Hm."
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Uchiha Kenzurai :: Comments
Mkay there are a number of things wrong, but don't worry i'll help you fix them:
1) In your bio it says you were born in Konoha, yet for your village it says sawa...
2) You are only allowed the three academy jutsu in the beginning and you can only buy and/or learn (if they are free like the ones in the academy library) jutsu.
3) All canon clans are banned...
So please fix these things and it will be approved
1) In your bio it says you were born in Konoha, yet for your village it says sawa...
2) You are only allowed the three academy jutsu in the beginning and you can only buy and/or learn (if they are free like the ones in the academy library) jutsu.
3) All canon clans are banned...
So please fix these things and it will be approved
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